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For I have travelled the path
finding the route to happyness
leaving the emptyness and the lonelyness
even though I thought the path was not easy to be found
I was mistaken, for I was with emptyness for to long.

But now I found the words to lead me
spread out, open and easy to read
as though it was my only choice
the power of free will lost, for only a second,
but I wouldn't want it any other way.

My tread, easy now
light now
without haste
following, guided, onward
I wouldn't want it any other way
©2004-2009 *qwerty-dot-me
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Submitted: January 28, 2004
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon PowerShot G3
Shutter Speed: 1/1244 second
F Number: F/2.8
Focal Length: 7 mm
Date Picture Taken: Jan 17, 2004, 1:45:23 PM

Author's Comments

First of all I want to thank Pecchio [link] for letting me use his deviation " Walk_On_By". Thanks my friend :hug:
Second of all I like to thank Teea [link] She mentioned that I should post this, so here I am making my first poem devious.

Any comments are welcome
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~duckyling:iconduckyling: Jan 28, 2004, 10:30:30 PM
very nice poem...i feeling :peace: from your peom..:):)
duckyling
*pecchio:iconpecchio: Jan 29, 2004, 1:20:00 AM
it's great my friend.

If someone has to thank that's me, for putting my picture besides such great words :hug:

T.
*qwerty-dot-me:iconqwerty-dot-me: Jan 29, 2004, 5:33:22 AM
Yes Duckyling.. I like to call it my inner peace.. Thank you :hug:
~jso037:iconjso037: Jan 29, 2004, 9:29:16 AM
haha.. you know what would crack me up.... if a crab sprouted out of one of the foot prints and was lookin in the direction of the water... it would of seemed like he was sayin.. "hey!!... i'm tryin to sleep here!.." ahh.... my imagination flows like the rivers of time which time forgot to remember to forget.... :-D ... nice job...

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~Nikitia1979:iconNikitia1979: Jan 30, 2004, 2:10:30 PM
you´re are not only a great photographer and now I know you´re are also wirte lovely poems

:hug:
~teea:iconteea: Jan 30, 2004, 3:47:33 PM
Ah!:blushes: ... beautiful K. really beautiful! :)

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Abyssus Abyssum invocat.
~youngie:iconyoungie: Jan 31, 2004, 12:58:51 AM
I love this picture, it remembers me on a picture i've in one of my little books with the nice short stories of love and peace
~youngie:iconyoungie: Jan 31, 2004, 1:00:44 AM
It remembers me on my little book with those short stories about love and peace. But i'm sure you'll find another way :-)
*qwerty-dot-me:iconqwerty-dot-me: Jan 31, 2004, 12:52:14 PM
Thanks for the comment, but as I mentioned the photo wasn't my work. It was my intention to submit a poem, first try :p. But then again, your last remark.. that's if that's related to the poem.. Then you made me feel honoured :D
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